Six Sentence Sunday


Here is my six sentences from my WiP (work in progress)—Demon Mine.  This is the hero Samael talking to the heroines (Liliana) sister Eva.

“I will never stop, Sami.”  She smirked as his lips turned down and his eyes darkened in anger. “Liliana needs to learn that what she did to me was wrong.”

“What the hell did she do to you?  She left Adam, which made it possible for you to be…to exist.”


 “No, she made it so, the man who should have been mine, pined away the rest of his days over her!

 Thanks for stopping by I do hope this snippet has caught your interest in Demon Mine.  You can find the rules for 6  Sentence Sunday here: http://www.sixsunday.com/faqs/
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About Author Nikki

Nikki Prince is a mother of two, who’s always had a dream to be a published author in the romance genre. Her passion lies in raising her children as readers, gaming, cooking, reading and her writing. Her mother can now breathe easy about the child who used to get in trouble because she was hiding books everywhere and reading when it wasn’t appropriate. Nikki’s a multi-published author with several epublishing houses. She loves to write Interracial romances in all genres, but wants to let everyone know to not box her in, because there is always room for growth.

32 Responses to Six Sentence Sunday

  1. Eden Connor says:

    Lots of good tension in that snippet, Nikki, I’m already looking forward to more 🙂

  2. Thank you Eden. I am trying to bring some heat with this one…:)

  3. Jess Schira says:

    I really like your second paragraph. The rhythm sounds so authentic. Excellent 6!

  4. Paula Martin says:

    Intriguing six. Wonder how she’s going to make Liliana learn?

  5. Thanks so much Jess for stopping by! I appreciate the comment.

    Nikki

  6. Thank you Paula..I am really having fun with this WiP. 🙂

  7. Lia Davis says:

    Love the tension. Great six!

  8. Very nice six, Nikki! 🙂

  9. Carrie Lynn Barker says:

    You’ve got my interest, Nikki. Can’t wait to read it! 🙂

  10. Brenda says:

    Wow, very very good!

  11. Karyn Good says:

    Great tension. Raises lots of questions for me. Great job.

  12. Lia thanks so much for stopping by and commenting.

  13. Carrie Lynn Barker I sure hope to keep your interest with this story. Thank you for stopping by!

  14. Brenda thank you girl! I appreciate you stopping by.

  15. Thank you Karyn! That’s the plan.

  16. Cora Blu says:

    That leaves many questions in the air. sounds like a hit girl.

    Cora Blu

  17. Leaves me wondering so many things! Awesome six!!!

  18. Toni Kelly says:

    Yikes, that’s quite an angry accusation. Wonder how she’s going to get out of that one…

  19. Thanks so much for stopping by Cora. 🙂 And I am hoping it will be a hit for sure.

  20. Jennifer thanks so much for stopping by:)

  21. Hehe Toni Kelly, yeah that was definitely and accusation…:) and knowing Eva…she will find a way or just plain not care.

  22. Sara Walter thank you! I appreciate you stopping by.

  23. Calisa Rhose says:

    Nice. Makes me want to know what is going on that she won’t stop.

  24. Thanks for stopping by Calisa 🙂 I want that question to definitely be in everyone’s mind.

  25. Nice six! It makes me curious! 🙂

  26. Ceri Hebert says:

    Nice tension! Well done.

  27. Love your sample, Nikki! So glad you joined us SSS’ers :c)

    I definitely want to read more!!!

    Tempe

  28. Thanks so much Tempe! You gave me the nudge and I finally did it.

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